Great elevator pitch and idea Dillion. I really liked how you took this in a very professional manner and explained the products "Jelly Jam' offers. Perhaps one of my recommendations would be to add some statistics in regards of how much students spend and how much they would be saving by purchasing from "Jelly Jam" or anything of that sort. Overall, great video really enjoyed watching it and your idea its pretty great itself. Here is the link to my Elevator Pitch feel free to go check it out. http://susanamorales0129.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no1.html
Great job and the pitch. I think this is a very simple idea with a lot of potential. Just like professor Pryor said, it does not have to be a ground breaking idea. Would you actually consider doing this? And would there be any alternative for people that are allergic to peanut butter? Great work any way. Here's a link to my pitch: kevinramos910.blogspot.com
Hi Dillon, I like your idea! I love peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and I eat them almost every day for lunch so I would love to save a few extra minutes in the morning and just get one at school. I thought you did a good job on your pitch and you have a catchy and easy to remember name for your bussiness. If you would like to check out my Elevator Pitch you can watch it here: http://www.emmastetterent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
Great elevator pitch and idea Dillion. I really liked how you took this in a very professional manner and explained the products "Jelly Jam' offers. Perhaps one of my recommendations would be to add some statistics in regards of how much students spend and how much they would be saving by purchasing from "Jelly Jam" or anything of that sort. Overall, great video really enjoyed watching it and your idea its pretty great itself. Here is the link to my Elevator Pitch feel free to go check it out. http://susanamorales0129.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no1.html
ReplyDeleteGreat job and the pitch. I think this is a very simple idea with a lot of potential. Just like professor Pryor said, it does not have to be a ground breaking idea. Would you actually consider doing this? And would there be any alternative for people that are allergic to peanut butter? Great work any way. Here's a link to my pitch: kevinramos910.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi Dillon,
ReplyDeleteI like your idea! I love peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and I eat them almost every day for lunch so I would love to save a few extra minutes in the morning and just get one at school. I thought you did a good job on your pitch and you have a catchy and easy to remember name for your bussiness. If you would like to check out my Elevator Pitch you can watch it here: http://www.emmastetterent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
Thanks for sharing!