https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6SwenqMSYcI
I really didn't receive much negative feedback on the first elevator pitch! Please for anyone who is reading this do not be scared to hurt my feelings! You will be doing me a disservice by not telling me what I am doing wrong! Thanks!
Dillon,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was good! For future reference it would be easier for a viewer of your blog if you embedded the link in a way that one could just press play, instead of having to copy and paste the link. But, anyways I had the same experience as you where I received little negative feedback. Keep up the good work! and check out my blog at: http://stefankostas.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Dillon,
ReplyDeleteI want to start out by saying great job on looking professional, not too many hand movements, and having someone film you standing up. However, it was a little hard to hear you due to the noise from the outside, or the parking garage you were in. My only advice is to film somewhere that is as professional as you are next time! Otherwise, great job. I really love this idea because it evoked a feeling we can all relate to- moving away from home. Here's a linkt to mine: http://maursfirstblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Awesome idea! PB&J sandwiches might actually be my favorite thing in the world (I eat them for dessert way too often!) Great job getting dressed up for this and taking it seriously. Your demographic seems spot on, as the taste of nostalgia is always sure to appeal to customer emotion. I could see this being a very communal thing as well, almost like a non-alcoholic bar if that makes sense? You may also have opportunity with a food truck/cart leading up to a brick and mortar store. Suggestions for your next pitch were already hinted at above (better filming location and embedding the link), but neither detract from your business idea.
ReplyDeleteCheck out my pitch at http://ufentclassblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Dillon!
ReplyDeleteFirstly, great job on your pitch and looking professional and having a very professional set up. It was a tad hard for me to hear you so I do agree with the other comment in that fashion. As far as the actual idea, I do love the concept! I feel like it is something that can grow once more specifics are added to the idea. Suggestions for the next pitch would mostly be filming a bit better and to embed the link just so it's easy to access.
here is a link to my post! http://breyflynch.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html