https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGOLIho5Wzc&feature=youtu.be
The feedback on my last video was that I needed to film in a quieter place, so I filmed inside this time! As for my actual pitch I did not receive any direction on where to go so I made some minor adjustments to the things I said. Enjoy!
I hope this place would be cheap to eat at. I don't really think butter jelly sandwiches can be that expensive unless you're using some really rare ingredients, which I doubt since you said you want to make food that reminds us of home. But I'm curious as to why to stick with just jelly and butter. That doesn't remind me of home. The sandwiches that reminds me of home is a good BLT egg sandwich. But then again everyone is different. Good job on the presentation!
ReplyDeleteHi Dillon,
ReplyDeleteYour video made me crave a PBJ. Your pitch was very good and made me think back to my childhood when I would have a PBJ almost every day. I like your business idea and would definitely be a customer. At first glance, the world of PBJs may seem pretty cut and dry, but there are endless combinations of styles of peanut butter, flavors of jelly, maybe even jam, and other creative things you could do with your sandwiches!
Thanks for sharing! Here's a link to my elevator pitch. http://jamestyrrell.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-number-3-chug.html